(inspired by Joy Harjo’s “She Had Some Horses,” resurrected for NaPoWriMo prompt)
(Thank you Na/GloPoWriMo for featuring my poem on Day Twenty-Seven of NaPoWriMo 2019)
She wore armor
She wore armor over her beating heart
She wore armor over her pendulous breasts
She wore armor over her curving hips
She wore armor over her mound of flesh.
She wore armor
She wore armor over her good ideas
She wore armor over her strong hands.
She wore armor over her written words
She wore armor over her selfless service
She wore armor.
She wore armor over the cold space in their bed
She wore armor over the spoken wounds
She wore armor over the indifference
She wore armor over the goodbye
She wore armor.
She wore armor when her husband left
She wore armor on the morning metro
She wore armor at her Pentagon desk
She wore armor in her smile.
She wore armor
Her armor shifted under his gaze.
Her armor protested under his hands
Her armor groaned under his kiss
Her armor cracked under his weight
She unfasrened her armor.
This is great! Repetition works so well here. The armor really gets heavy after awhile, doesn’t it?
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I’m find of the part where, with the right person, I can take it off.
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Beautiful and powerful.
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Thanks, Lucia.
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No feeling quite like taking that armor off!
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Nothing quite like it!!
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This is amazing!!
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Thank you!!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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Congratulations!
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Perhaps my favorite
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Thanks, Gretchen.
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Very cool photos and wonderful poetry. I am a old soldiers. Taught my children to shoot the pistols and the 22 rifle. Now my grandchildren.
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Thanks for the comment. Yeah, that was on the range in Afghanistan. My special forces friend new I hadn’t actually fired the 9mm they issued me (after range training, I mean, I qualified), so they took me out to their range so I could practice. I love that you are teaching gun accuracy and safety to your grandchildren!
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Good to know the 9mm. I taught the officers and was part of the qualification for my last five year in the Army. I had to carry the 9mm when I served in South and Central American. Takes more skill than a rifle. You are welcome MaxieJane.
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Ahh. That’s what should happen to armour, if we’re lucky. Congrats on being featured!!
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Thanks, same to you! I can’t believe I missed it!
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You mean missed when I was featured? Or missed posting on this site? 🙂 Well, I’m certainly glad I told you about it!
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I missed when you were featured. And for some reason when I literally go to your site, it most people’s sites, in WordPress, I can’t like them there.
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Ah, this is not good news. I’ve heard of this problem. I hope it’s solved soon.
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Extra thanks to you, because you helped me figure out where to post on their site!!
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You’re most welcome! 🙂
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Great use of repetition. Finding someone who allows for vulnerability is a rare and wonderful gift.
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Thank you! Yes, I agree.
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This is fantastic!
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Thank you!!
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My pleasure! 🙂
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